We presented our ideas to the rest of the class who gave us feedback:
-We came up with good ideas and a good plot that makes sense and has conventions of a thriller
-We understand the genre and what many films and trailers typically show
-We need to further our ideas to include some more sub-plots that will include different characters, including the involvement of parents
-Ask for permission from the train station which we were planning on film at.
-We need to further our ideas to include some more sub-plots that will include different characters, including the involvement of parents
-Ask for permission from the train station which we were planning on film at.
Good explanation of title, USP, plot and music. You have a good understanding of how low budget, independent film attracts a British audience. The plot between the three main characters is well thought out and realistic. You will need to add in some sub plots, possibly involving older characters such as parents and teachers and other issues for the teenagers such as exam pressure of future plans. You also need to consider how Owen will try to warn Katie off and how much of her death you will show or allude to.
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